Fort - some thoughts:
* I would appreciate it if you would stop making me cry
These are beautiful
* That old light blue hex paper reminds me of the stuff that AH used to sell - I designed many a Bug Cave Complex on those suckers
* You really need to put "FKM#" board numbers in there to make it easier to refer to
As for the rest of my comments, I decided it might be easier to do them graphically. I marked up your boards with red, and gave my rationale on the right. Hope you don't mind. At the very least it's interesting to see what one map guy thinks about another's drafts
Thanks for the chance to see and comment on these - it's fun, brave, and commendable.